Friday, January 29, 2010

Third Post - FINDING by Nilabh

Here is my initial draft!

 


300 years have past since the Great battle of the water world happened. The gods of the Ocean and rivers and ponds and streams all fought for their right. Some won some lost as this dried up sea far east killing many. But the new era has come. The Survived ones are back for the journey. The Seamen wants to sail again and here their search ends!


6 comments:

Mitali P said...

cool.. i can fairly say this one is the cleanest so far haha

Sumit said...

man u rule.......jahapana tussi gr8 ho....mera tofa kabul karo...

TANMAY said...

Its as usual awesome nick. I envy you.

ujwala said...

Wow, Amazing work..I dont have words to describe.

Mitali P said...

ok lets get down to business
some constructive feedback

1.just the pose of the character and the beast.. make it stronger, intention of both is not clear

2.can u change the pose of the beast posed in front of the ship.. its getting merged with the sails

3.hehe your ship is really detailed and nice! but it looks like it cant stand on its own.. so i think youre gonna add something like mounds etc beneath it

4.the left hand corner.. add something to balance it

more later! hope you work on this.. best of luck!

Nilabh said...

Thank you guys for the comments! :-)
Mitali - Great observation and suggestions.
I am gonna add a spear in the manlike creatures hand. so the posse will justify.
Then the beast is gonna be colored differently but still i'll see what else can i do.
Ya i will add some support and an Anchor to the ship.
Balancing will be done. already in progress :-)
Thanks a lot lot lot .... will post the update soon. (before midnight) :-)