Second draft - Mermaids by Mitali

Hi guys.. this the second draft, as you can see I have added more anatomical strusture to it... I am not good with colors, so spent the hours fighting with it... I tried anything that I could to make it look satisfactory.. still it's not satisfactory to me..

damn I need to work..
on the details.. still not figured it out
fire away!

Another walk blocking.

Yeah, I can almost see your faces.. "What? another walk?" I seem to be stuck on walks, as a matter of fact, I am. I don't feel satisfied with the walks that I work on...

What I have here is a walk that I blocked yesterday and today... pose to pose and using the time 24 fps, 12f march time... till now I have found this timing very useful [this doesnt means I always use this]

Here it is:


I need help from you guys esp the animators.. how is the spine supposed to flow in these poses? o_O because it seems stiff... help or links are appreciated :D

Also I wanna know what timings you use?

P.S. This is my blog about daily comics hope you enjoy 'em too!

Comic Relief!

Bye~